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subject- In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Recently, there is a dispute whether the eating habit have been changing comparing with the old generation. It is clear that some people prefer the fastfood more than old generation. However, I totally agree with this view. This essay will justify my opinion.
First, there is a lot of fastfood restaurants in many countries. People can eat and buy these foods easily. Some people say
that the fastfood helps people who do not have enough time to eat their meal. In addition, the fastfood is very comfortable eating and people can save the time.
On the other hand, some people say that the fastfood have not enough nutrition, so it does not help to people. Because, this taste is the most extreme and there is a lot of salt and oil. Furthermore, people tend to find more extreme taste, so the fastfood is changed more and more extreme taste by the CEO.
It situation is really dangerous for people to save their health. The proportion of condiments keep increasing consistently.
According to newspapers in Korea, the teenager obesity was dramatically increased in modern society. Because, most teenager prefer the fastfood more than slow food. Compare to old generation and now, old generation children cannot eat the fastfood. they ate always slow food, fruits and vegetable, so they balance of eating habit were good condition.
In conclusion, the situation is alarming for not only children but also adults. People will change this phenomenon. I agree that children eat the fastfood once a week, but the fastfood drawback should not be ignored.
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