life is challenge
at this holiday,i meet a girl when i travel with my sister.this is a bus to the sea.the girl just alone.it's the first that i see a girl just herself.i feel it's so nice.then i think i need do something.i am adult.maybe the world was not safe for me,but life is a challenge.i will go Korea just me.it's very happy for me.
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life is challenge
at this holiday,i meet a girl when i travel with my sister.this is a bus to the sea.the girl just alone.it's the first that i see a girl just herself.i feel it's so nice.then i think i need do something.i am adult.maybe the world was not safe for me,but life is a challenge.i will go Korea just me.it's very happy for me.
Life is a Challenge
During my last holiday, I met a girl when I travelled with my sister. We were on a bus going to the sea. The girl was alone. It was the first time that I saw a girl by herself. I felt it was so nice. Then I thought I need to do something. I am an adult. Maybe the world isn't safe but life is a challenge. I will go to Korea by myself. I'm very happy about it.
Hello! An important mistake you made was not using your verbs in the past tense as I underlined. This is a very common mistake for Chinese English learners.
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