My bad day!
Yesterday I went to visit my family. I started to set off around 5 :30 p.m.During I was on the bus it rained , then the traffic was getting bad , there were many cars which could not move on the roads. That made me crazy and wanted to get off the bus at that moment. I was getting hungry and thirsty. I had nothing to eat as well as I did not know what to do.Afterwards, I arrived home around 10:30 p.m.It was too late,and then wen to bad.
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My bad day!
Yesterday I went to visit my family. I started to set off around 5 :30 p.m.While I was on the bus it rained , then the traffic was getting bad , there were many cars which could not move on the roads. That made me crazy and I wanted to get off the bus at that moment. I was getting hungry and thirsty. I had nothing to eat and I did not know what to do. Afterwards, I arrived home around 10:30 p.m. It was too late,and then went to bed.
I am so sorry you had a bad day ! But your English is great :) Carry on! ;)
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