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Music it's My Religion.. If you love music, I think we have a lot to talk about :) One of my hobby : singing????????????????????
I like traveling, already visited some countries in Europe and I like the most Italy???????? Spain???????? an Sweden????????. Someday I would like to go to the Japany ????????
I like ART. Expecially PoP-Art and Renaissance art.
And I draw a little bit:)
I like cooking and think it should be not only tasty , but also healthy.
My favorite cousin is Italiano.
As a doctor I respect sport. Favorite winter spot is Ski. ???? I'm juss skier class A ( beginning) , but I planning to continue ski lessons and got karving class.
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Please help to check my homework. Thank you!
Music is My Religion.. If you love music, I think we have a lot to talk about :) One of my hobbies is singing.
I like traveling, and have already visited some countries in Europe. The ones I like the most are Italy, Spain, and Sweden. Someday I would like to go to Japan.
I like ART. Expecially PoP-Art and Renaissance Art.
And I draw a little bit:)
I like cooking. I think food should be not only tasty, but also healthy/healthful.
My favorite cousin is Italian.
As a doctor, I recognize the benefit of sports. My favorite winter sport is skiing. I'm only [1] a class A skier (beginner), but I'm planning to continue ski lessons, and I take a carving class.
[1] You wrote "juss". The correct spelling is "just". But here, the word "only" is better stylistically.
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