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please, check my article and grammar recently, there is a dispute whether students depend using a computer in classroom. they tend to look down on thier reading and writing skills. some people believe that writing and reading skills is more important for young students , so i disagree students are using a computer in classroom. this essay will justify my opinion. First, we can see that students are using a computer everywhere. they are doing homework and studying something. By the use of computer, they can take a step forward thier knowledge easily. In addition, teacher also prefer using a computer. because it can teach ease to students in education. on the other hand, it is clear that students prefer a computer than typed-up by thier hands, so it is serious problem. they ignored thier spelling, it damage the education and thier writing and reading skills. in addition, they focus on conciseness where send text. in fact, students are making a new word in modern society. according to newspaper, new 300 word are made by students per month, some people can not understand these words. Teacher also complain these situation. because there is the same situation in thier exam. furthermore , the book stores sales has decreased the last decade. because, students do not have to read a books, they get certain information through thier computer although affected thier reading and writing skills. in conclusion, most student are using computer although damaged thier writing and reading skills. i totally disagree with the opinion.

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Please, check my article and grammar.

Recently, there is a dispute whetherover the need of computer utilization in the classrooms students depend using a computer in classroom. They tend to look down on thier reading and writing skills. Some people believe that writing and reading skills isare more important for young students (more important requires a then after), so i disagree students are using the use of a computer in the classroom. This essay will justify my opinion.

First, we can see that students are using a computer everywhere. They are doing homework and studying something. By the use of computer, they can easily take a step forward thier knowledge easily. In addition, teacher also prefer using a computer. Because it can teach ease to students in education.

on the other hand, it is clear that students prefer a computer than typed-up by thier hands, so it is serious problem. they ignored thier spelling, it damage the education and thier writing and reading skills. in addition, they focus on conciseness where send text. in fact, students are making a new word in modern society.

According to newspapers, three-hundred new 300 word are made by students per month, even though some people cannot understand these words.
Teacher also complain about these this situation. because students use neologisms there is the same situation  in thier exam. Furthermore , the book stores sales hashave decreased during the last decade because, students choose not to do not have to read a books, since they get certain information from through thier computer although it affected affects thier reading and writing skills.

In conclusion, most students are using computer although it's having a bad influence ondamaged thier writing and reading skills, so that I totally disagree with the opinion given above.

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