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Spa experience
Last Friday I went with my girlfriend to a spa, here in Madrid. We already went 7 years ago and last Christmas I bought 2 gift cards. They seemed me a well like a good Christmas gift because you have one year to use it them. – I didn’t just give her that ;)
The place was nice because it looksed like old Arabic baths. When we got to the spa we had to put a blue cover bag in on our feet because anyone can walk with shoes as far as the changing room. In the changing room we put on our bathing costume and we went to downstairs to start the tour.
Firstly, everybody had a shower with soap and then each people can person could choose their own way. Before starting the tour, the staff told us that it’s better if you begin in the warm pool and then you go to the hot or cold pool. This is the recommended way because your body needs to acclimatize to the temperature.
While we were having our baths staff called people, normally in couples, to take a massage. We (took) had a relaxing massage for fifteen minutes. The masseur asked me in which parts of my body I’d like it: just body, just legs or both. I chose both.
It was a really nice experience. I think I could get used to going to the spa every month :) :)
Sounds good!
Spa experience
Last Friday I went with my girlfriend to a spa, here in Madrid. We already went there 7 years ago and last Christmas I bought 2 gift cards. They seemed to me a well good Christmas gift because you have one year to use it (or them). – I didn’t just give her that ;)
The place was nice because it looks looked like old Arabic baths. When we got to the spa we had to put a blue cover bag in on our feet because anyone can walk with shoes as far as the changing room. In the changing room we put on our bathing costumes and we went to downstairs to start the tour.
Firstly, everybody had a shower with soap and then each people person can choose their own way. Before you start the tour, the staff told us that it’s better if you begin in the warm pool and then you go to the hot or cold pool. This is the recommended way because your body needs to acclimatize to the temperature.
While we were having our baths the staff called people, normally in couples, to take have a massage. We took had a relaxing massage for fifteen minutes. The masseur asked me in which parts of my body I’d like it: just body, just legs or both. I chose both.
It was a really nice experience. I think I could get used to going to a (or the) spa every month :) :)
That sounds very pleasant and relaxing. Well written too!
My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.
They seemed a good Christmas gift because you have one year to use it/them - I think you could say either in this case. "You have one year to use it (the gift)" or "You have one year to use them (the gift cards)". I think "them" sounds better though.
We already went there 7 years ago - A more elegant way to say this might be "We had already been there 7 years ago".
put a blue cover bag on our feet - You could also say "put blue shoe covers on our feet"
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