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Who I am? Hi my name is Leidiande, I'm a student. who am I?, it's a ask dificulty, but I can at last describes me. Good,I like very of to watch films, but very even, especially the hobbit, this I have watched a ten times. The iron man, guy this films it's amazing wordless, other that don't can to miss é my darling maze runner, this make up the list of the three best. Music it's other passion, it's something so amazing that really make me well to play my instruments. I would like of the to play perfectly guitar, piano,saxophone,baterry, keyboard and so on. But it's a little dificulty, bus I do that I can. The above have more errors, because I'm starting in english, thank you!

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Who I am?

Hi my name is Leidiande, I'm a student. Who am I? It's a difficult question (porque "ask" é o verbo, e "pergunta" e "questão" são "question" mas isso depende do contexto), but I can at last describes myself (conjugação sem 's' para 'eu', e "myself" é o pronome reflexivo de eu). Well (mais natural, apresenta uma nova ideia), I really like very of to watch films (nenhuma preposição para "gostar" em inglês, simplesmente "I like _____), but very even (O que quer dizer?), especially the hobbit, which (pronome relativo) I have watched a ten times. The Iron man, guy this film is amazing without doubt, another that is unmissable is my darling maze runner, this makes up the list of the three best. Music is other passion só é o verbo), it's something so amazing that really makes me well to play my instruments well. I would like of the to play perfectly the guitar perfectly, piano,saxophone, drums , keyboard and so on. It can be difficult, but I do what I can.
The above has many errors, because I'm starting in english, thank you!

 

Não tem problema, espero que isso te ajude! Diria que você poderia te concentrar nos verbos e as diferenças entre primeira, segunda e terceira pessoa (não sei se se diz assim em português!). Normalmente, "he, she, it" se adiciona um 's' no fim da palavra e os outros sem isso. Ademais, "I like music, I like films, I like watching films". Deste modo, sempre é "Like + verb, like +noun". Você tem começado bem, continua o esforço! 

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