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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I don't know how long I would be in the part time job. This is my first intership experience that I have been taking for one year . I got it by harding working and good programming skill and it give me the money which make me lead a better life. It give me not only the money but also important experience to learn how to work with others. It is not a bad job, but it does not suit me. I want a job that can get in touch with smarter, more professional people. My major is not computer related, but I love programming and software design. I want a job that can make me more professional and more competitive.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I don't know how long I would be able to stay in this part time job.

This is my first internship experience that I had taken {or "..that I had accepted"} been taking for a year . I got it by working harding and my good programming skills . Additionally, and it gave me the money which make me  to lead a better life. It gave me not only the money but also an important experience to learn how to work with others.

It is not a bad job, but it does not suit me well either. I want a job that I can get in touch with smarter and more professional people. My major is not computer related, but I love programming and software design. I want a job that can make me a more professional and more competitive person. {or "I want a job that gives me more professional feel and more competitiveness."}

{you're actually really good with english. excellent job! keep it up! oh, also, do not use "And" more than once in a sentence. you may use commas to separate them in replacement.}

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