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My second writing in "Italki"
I present you an old odd picture. Imagine: The suburbs of a big city situated in a developing country. You can see a lot of poor houses made with waste materials. But we can see that each of the houses have has a satellite dish to watch TV. OMG!!! They haven't got money to buy foods but everybody have has money to buy a TV? How it's is that possible?
I have a foolish theory. The most important things for humans are foods, clothes and relationships. Are Do you agree? (or Are you in agreement?). I'm not. I think the most important thing for humans is to have our time occupied with something fun. My little daughter prefers to play with me that than to eat. I think that this is because our brain is ready to learn things to survive, and the best way to do that is through the a game or through to do doing something fun.
What do you think?
Very good, well written!
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