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My second writing in "Italki" I present you an old picture. Imagine: suburbs of a big city situated in a developing country. You can see a lot of poor houses made with waste materials. But we can see that each of the houses have a satellite dish to watch TV. OMG!!! They haven't got money to buy foods but everybody have money to buy a TV? How it's possible? I have a fool theory. The most important things for humans are foods, clothes and relationships. Are you agree? I'm not. I think the most important thing for humans is to have our time occupied with something fun. My little daughter prefer play with me that eat. I think that this is because our brain is ready to learn things to survive, and the best way to do that is through the game or through to do something fun. What do you think?

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My second writing in "Italki"

I present you an old odd picture. Imagine: The suburbs of a big city situated in a developing country. You can see a lot of poor houses made with waste materials. But we can see that each of the houses have has a satellite dish to watch TV. OMG!!! They haven't got money to buy foods but everybody have has money to buy a TV? How it's is that possible?
I have a foolish theory. The most important things for humans are foods, clothes and relationships. Are Do you agree? (or Are you in agreement?). I'm not. I think the most important thing for humans is to have our time occupied with something fun. My little daughter prefers to play with me that than to eat. I think that this is because our brain is ready to learn things to survive, and the best way to do that is through the a game or through to do doing something fun.

What do you think?

 

Very good, well written!

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I have an experience similar to yours. Last year I was in Romania with my friend who was born in Romania. I had a lot of funny drivinig throught the wide plans and moors of Romania and throught its mountains in Transilvania. In some cases I noticed the same situation you have written about. Despite some small cities don't have a funcitonal water system they have an efficent internet connection faster than italy's one. I informed about this situation and some local people explain the reason. They said me that years before UE had supplied Romania governament for building public infrastructures and internet connection was one of these. Owing to this political plan ,now people who live in thes cities have difficulties to find essential goods but have the last model of smartphone . I dont know this fact is only a consequence of political decisions or there are some anthropological causes as you state.

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