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A Letter for my friend Roberto to thank yoy for my holidays in his house. Dear Roberto, I write to thank you for the time that we were both in your house in Ibiza. I have just arrived and my dog is kissing me why it's very nervous when it sees that I've arrived. I wolud go to rest, but I can't because must to clean my house. I've been a lot of days out. Tomorrow I'm going to work, and in the afternoon will go to my parents' house to give them some chocolates that I bought. My back are red and burned. we had a too long bathsun. Maybe we would put a sun protector. I enjoyed the discoteques, but I think the people in holidays drink too much alcohol in Ibiza. It's so stressed if you prefer a relax holidays. You can't sleep at nights, there are a lot of noisy. I'm sending you all the photos of this weekend by mail now. I want you visit me early. More kisses to you. Miguel

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A Letter for my friend Roberto to thank yoy him for my holidays in his house.

Dear Roberto,
I write to thank you for the time that we were both in your house in Ibiza. I have just arrived and my dog is kissing me why because it's very nervous when it sees that I've arrived.
I would go to rest (or: "go to bed"), but I can't because I must to clean my house. I've been a lot of days out.
Tomorrow I'm going to work, and in the afternoon will go to my parents' house to give them some chocolates that I bought.
My back are is red and burned. We had a too long sunbathsun. Maybe we would should have put on a sun protector.
I enjoyed the discoteques, but I think the people in during holidays drink too much alcohol in Ibiza. It's so too stressed if you prefer a relaxing holidays. You can't sleep at nights; there are is a lot of noisenoisy.
I'm sending you all the photos of this weekend by mail now.
I want you visit me soon early.
More kisses to you.

Miguel

 

Your writing is very clear and well written.  -S

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