Do you want to know what's my treasure?

There are many things in my life that I am sure I don't have. I don't have the best car of the year, I don't have a big house, I don't have a lot of money in my account, I don't have my own business, I don't have the best job or some the best salary of in the world... But, I need to tell you that what I really have is absolutely better than everythings.. I have friends! and I have God! When you have God, he always looks for your wish.. and I don't have only a friend. No way! I have many friends! My friends help me when I am sad, they make me smile, they give me their arms, they give me their force and hope... They give a support when I need to anything in my life. Maybe, many people think that if they have material things, they will find happiness. But However, what is really important in our lives is not the things that we have , but the people that we care for. So, I am a rich person! I was never lonely, because I always have special friends, and I know that it's my great treasure!!! And you? What's your treasure?

There are a few grammatical mistakes. We never start a sentence with and or but, and you only need to write 'the' with a capital letter if it is the start of a sentence. Overall, good effort :) 

Do you want to know what my treasure is?

There are many things in my life that I am sure I don't have. I don't have the best car of year, I don't have a big house, I don't have a lot of money in my account, I don't have my own business, I don't have the best job or some, the best salary of the world. But, I need to tell you that what I really have is absolutally better than anything else - I have friends! And I have God! When you have God, He always looks for your wish. And I don't have only one friend. No way! I have many friends! My friends help me when I am sad, they make me smile, they give me their arms, they give me their force and hope... They give a support when I need to anything in my life. Maybe, many people think that if they have material things, they will find happiness. But what is really important in our lives not is the things that we have , but the people that we have who care. So, I am a rich person! I never was lonely, because I always had special friends. And I know that it's my great treasure!!! And you? What's your treasure?

[Good job.  "Happiness is not so much a matter of having what you want, as it is wanting what you have."]