Could u correct my grammer H.W?

Put the verb in brackets into correct tense:
I'm so desperate.I wish 1(not move) to this place.it's not a bad place but it's so quiet.if only there 2(be) more people here my age,then I wouldn't feel so lonely.I wish my firend3(move)here from town.I thought I would enjoy the quiet life of the village but now I wish there4(be) some roads nearby so I could hear the traffic.I wish I5(afford)to move back to town but I don't have money.I wish it6(stop)raining so atleast I could go for a walks in the fields.sometimes when I'm really sad I wish the village7(disappear)or my house8(collapse).Maybe it'll be greater if I9(be)more patient .I wish I10(write)more cheerful letter .it's made me even sadder .I look forward to hearing from u some suggestions.

Answers
1-hadn't moved
2-were
3-had moved
4-were
5-could afford
6-would stop
7-disappeared would disappear
8-collapsed would collapse
9-were
10-wrote

Your English is in pretty good shape. :)