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Travelling (Correct my text please!)
Today I want to talk about a very special subject. I love travelling; travelling is my hobby. Every summer my family and I go to at least to one foreign country. My parents say I'm such a lucky girl because I've been in many a lots of countries. When I was 11, we made our second important trip, and our destination was China. Before leaving, I really was very afraid because it was my first time travelling outside of Europe. We spent in a total of 24 hours flying. We stayed in two different apartments in Beijing, and then we went to Hong Kong, where we spent two more weeks in a boat. Both the apartments and the boat were exchanges, but I'm going to talk about this another day. We spent a little bit more than a month in China and then we came back to Spain. I really liked that trip. It was a new and a very interesting experience. Despite the fact that I was so little and I don't remember anything, I'm happy because I can say I've been in to Asia with at only 11 years old. My parents always tell me that in their era, this was unimaginable. Apart from China, I have also been in Sweden, Holland, EUA, Poland, London, and some other countries. I really love travelling because it's the best way to learn about other cultures, to see how other people lives live and how different are some countries are from than our country. Moreover, I love photography and everywhere I go I can take special photos.
I would like someone to correct my text, and tell me other sentences or words that would be better! Thank you so much!
Very nice job, Mireia! You have a very good grasp on the language. Keep up the good work :)
Travelling (Correct my text please!)
Today I want to talk about a very special subject. I love travelling, travelling is my hobby. Every summer my family and I go at least to one foreign country. My parents say I'm such a lucky girl because I've been in a lots of countries. When I was 11, we made our second important trip, and our destination was China. Before leaving, I really was afraid because it was my first travel outside Europe. We spent in total 24 hours flying. We stayed in two different apartments in Beijing, and then we went to Hong Kong, where we spent two more weeks in a boat. Both apartments and the boat were exchanges, I'm going to talk about this another day. We spent a little bit more than a month in China and then we came back to Spain. I really liked that trip. It was a new and a very interesting experience. Despite the fact that I was so little and I don't remember anything, I'm happy because I can say I've been in Asia and was only 11 years old (at the time). My parents always tell me that in their era/back in their day, this was unimaginable. Apart from China, I have also been in Sweden, Holland, EUA, Poland, London, and some other countries. I really love travelling because it's the best way to learn about other cultures, to see how other people live and how different are some countries are from ours. Moreover, I love photography and everywhere I go I can take special photos.
I would like someone to correct my text, and tell me other sentences or words that would be better! Thank you so much!
era- palabra demasiado formal aqui, pero correcto
...was only eleven years old at the time. lo decimos asi
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