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Surveillance technologies
Nowadays nothing is hidden. Sombody knows everything about you - what you buy, where you are, who you called last night. We're being recorded when we use our credit or cash cards.
CCTV cameras are keep track of us everywhere. However since people are aware that they are being watched they're less likely to commit a crime such as mugging or shoplifting.
Some decades later our body will be our ID. We will be identified more quickly by finger scanning, face recognition or voice recognition. Locating people is becoming a lot easier with GPS. A lot of rental and mobile phone companies are already using this technology. In years to come you won’t have to carry a big collection of cards, but a single identification card, which will contain a microchip so it will be able to store a lot more information. With these technologies our lives will be a lot faster and easier.
But as with most things it also has disadvantages. The biggest question is how our rights will be preserved. Though public safety is increasing and we have more convenience, we will have no privacy anymore. Is that worth it?
Hello Emese,
I'm not sure exactly who you are writing this for but generally this would appear to be an essay. In this case you should not use contractions or informal language (bunch). I also think that there should be a concluding paragraph giving your opinion but this depends on your original question.
Hope this helps
Bob
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