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Help me to correct my writing, thanks MY LAST SATURDAY I went to Valencia city around 1:00 p.m. and I walked through downtown . Valencia it´s a nice city and her historic center it´s very nice. You can walk around of cathedral and you can visit diferents old churches. Also Valencia has several parcs where you can practice different sports, such as running, football, cycling and roller-skate. After a walk I went to lunch in a restaurant. I ate paella´s dish, but in that restaurant not cooked very well, I had taste of better. In the evening I went to visit Moma´s museum. It´s an art and historic museum. It was really funny because there was an exposition about over time. And it was represented by diferent people who was wearing diferent costumes. They explained to me about diferents decades and historic moments. After that, I come back to my house to get some rest and sleep in my bed. Thank you very much!

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MY LAST SATURDAY
I went to Valencia city around 1:00p.m. and I walked through down town . Valencia it´s a nice city and its the historic center. it´s very nice. You can walk around of cathedral and you can visit differents old churches,also Valencia has several parks where you can practice different sports, such as running, football, cycling and roller-skate.After a walk I went to lunch in a restaurant. I ate paella´s dish, but in that restaurant not cooked very well, I had taste of better.In the evening I went to visit Moma´s museum. It´s an art and historic museum. It was really funny because there was an exposition about over time. And it was represented by diferent people who were wearing diferent costumes. They explained to me about diferents decades and historic moments. After that, I came back to my house to get some rest and sleep in my bed.Thank you very much!

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Thanks pushpendra, I'll do what you tell me.
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hi clara you have written very well but you have to pay your attention of right spelling and past tense.

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