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Reunion Hi Ana, you won’t believe it¡¡ yesterday when I was shopping, I bumped into a men who said me, We know each other, don’t we. At first I didn’t remember him but he started speaking about a lot of place where I had been during my graduation’s travel to Paris, suddenly I recognized him. He was the shy and handsome boy who I was loving in during that travel, do you remember? I loved him at first sight, but he wasn’t interested by me. Now fifteen years later he asked me for a date, he isn’t so handsome yet, but I don’t mind. I answered yes.

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Reunion

Hi Ana, you won’t believe it!! Yesterday when I was shopping, I bumped into a man who said to me, We know each other, don’t we. At first I didn’t remember him but he started speaking about a lot of places where I had been during my graduation’s travel* to Paris, suddenly I recognized him. He was the shy and handsome boy whom I was love with during that trip, do you remember? I loved him at first sight, but he wasn’t interested in me. Now fifteen years later he asked me for a date, he isn’t so handsome anymore, but I don’t mind. I answered yes.

 

* no entiendo ? during my trip after graduation??

whom-  es objeto de preposicion "with";  "whom" es la forma objeta, usas "who" para el sujeto de una clause.  La verdad es hablando usamos "who" casi todo el tiempo pero escribiendo, intenta usar la forma correcta.

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