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Photography for the win! Hello everyone! This is my first entry so hope you can fix my errors and rate this in the comments below! Today I'm gonna talk about my dream job: to become a proffesional photographer. Three years ago I studied an optative subject at school called: Digital Photography I really enjoyed it and two years ago I decided to study photography. At the moment I haven't got any kind of professional camera but I want to ge one in a near future. My favorite photographer is called Steve McCurry and he's from USA. He's the author of Sharbat Gula (the green-eyes Afghan girl) which is also my favorite photo. My main objetive is to make portraits from a lot of people because that's my favourite sort of photography since I saw Sharbat Gula for the first time, I literally fell in love with that picture. I'm also very interesting in the history of the photography (I think that that's my favourite thing about the photography) so I really enjoy reading the stories behind the pictures of great artists like Irving Penn, Henri Cartier-Bresson, Dorothea Lange, ... These artist usually covered wars such as the World War I, World War II, Spanish Civil War, Vietnam War, ... and yes, I know that the war is not beautiful but they had the skill to capture the moment in the past. I would like tofind someone interested in photography like me! I don't care where are you from, just talk to me even if you're a Spanish talker! Hope you like this text, I'll come back with more photography texts for sure!

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Photography for the win!

Hello everyone! This is my first entry so I hope you can correct my mistakes and rate this in the comments below!

Today I'm gonna talk about my dream job: to become a professional photographer.

Three years ago I studied an optative subject at school called: Digital Photography
I really enjoyed it and two years ago I decided to study photography.

At the moment I haven't got any kind of professional camera but I want to get one in the near future.

My favourite (I've added an ''u'' here because as I've seen in your others ''favourites'', you've written this entry in British English. However, both of them are totally okay) photographer is called Steve McCurry and he's from the USA.
He's the author of Sharbat Gula (the green-eyes Afghan girl) which is also my favorite photo.

My main objective (you could also say ''goal'' here) is to make portraits of lots of people because that's my favourite type of photography since I saw Sharbat Gula for the first time, I literally fell in love with that picture.

I'm also very interested in the history of the photography (I think that that's my favourite thing about the photography) so I really enjoy reading the stories behind the pictures of great artists like Irving Penn, Henri Cartier-Bresson, Dorothea Lange, ...
These artists usually covered wars such as the World War I, World War II, Spanish Civil War, Vietnam War, ...
and yes, I know that the war is not beautiful but they had the skills to capture those moments in the past.

I would like to find someone interested in photography like me! I don't care where you are from, just talk to me even if you're a Spanish speaker!

Hope you like this text, I'll come back with more photography texts for sure!

 

Your text is excellent! Just a few placement and vocabulary mistakes, but that's okay! You've done a really good job!


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