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American Guy I met
I met an American guy yesterday on my way to get my card from a bank. I was walking down on the hill from Sishane Station to karakoy port. It The weather was too hot, so I was a bit in a rush to reach there. The guy came over to me and asked if I know how to get to Karakoy port. As i I was on my way to the port, I told offered him to join me. We talked about ourselves and we found out that we had some things (It would be better to write "a few things" instead of "some things") in common. I am from Korea and he used to work in Korea for Levis as a director. It was fun to see him soeaking speaking some Korean words. I was glad when i I heard that he enjoyed stauing staying in Korea.
Hello HyunWook,
your writing style is really good and I believe that those small mistakes were just some mere typos. Other than that, I wanted to explain a bit about the underlined part of the sentence. When you add two sentences by "and" and If both the sentences have similar subject, you don't need to use the subject in the second part of that compound sentence.
:)
Enjoy!
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