Gun restrictions in the U.S.

Once an American person explained to me that it would be insane to restrict gun possessions* in the U.S. because then citizens would be murdered by all the criminals who own guns illegally. I am not so sure if this argument is correct. I believe that out of the 10,000 people who were shot dead in the U.S. this year, there are were more non criminals than criminals who had shot the innocent citizens. Looking at the human nature, everybody is a slave of one's to their own emotions such as anger and hatred. The difference between those who control their emotions or and those who can't, is actually not so big, but the consequences of their actions are. I believe that very few people are innocent when speaking of hurting or murdering someone in their minds. When people treat you in an unrighteous way, it is most natural thing to feel upset, angry or even furious. Also, how many people are innocent of acting indecently in their minds? I am not innocent at all and have killed many people in my mind and though I have controlled my mind, perhaps I am more cunning than those who do kill. Those who kill others do no longer care about their own self and well-being. I do not commit any crime because I still wish to enjoy life, help others, and do the things I still want to do. Becoming blinded by your anger and hatred towards somebody and terminating their lives seems like a very selfish thing to do, but it is also a helpless act. It proves that the person does not care about him or herself at all. After years of meditation, the body and the mind becomes intolerable for one's own anger or any restless emotions. When such training starts to take effect, you will be observant of your own emotions and slowly but firmly will start to have a much better control over your emotions which only consumes your energy. In several prisons they have introduced meditation techniques not only for the prisoners but also for the coworkers. At the end of the ten day session, all participants were embracing each other realizing that they were all equal and one. There should be restrictions of on gun purchases just like it was done in Australia which produced very positive results. In my country, it would be a very scary idea to even imagine that there would be a gun in our drawer.

* Note: you can say gun possession, but 'gun ownership' would be a better phrase to use.

Gun restrictions in the U.S.

Once an American person An American once (your sentence still conveys the point, but sounds unnatural) explained to me that it would be insane to restrict gun possessions in the U.S. because then citizens would be murdered by all the criminals who own guns illegally. I am not so sure if this argument is correct. I believe that out of 10,000 people who were shot dead in the U.S. this year, there are more non criminals than criminals who had shot the innocent citizens. Looking at the human nature, everybody is a slave of one's own emotions such as anger and hatred. The difference between those who control their emotions or can't, is actually not so big, but the consequences of their actions are. I believe that very few people are innocent when speaking of hurting or murdering someone in their minds. When people treat you in an unrighteous way, it is most natural thing to feel upset, angry or even furious. Also, how many people are innocent of acting indecently in their minds? I am not innocent at all and have killed many people in my mind and though I have controlled my mind, perhaps I am more cunning than those who do kill. Those who kill others do no longer care about their own self and well being. I do not commit any crime because I still wish to enjoy life, help others, and (always put an "and" before the last item on a list) do the things I still want to do. Becoming blinded by your anger and hatred towards somebody and terminate terminating their lives seem like a very selfish thing to do, but it is also a helpless act. It proves that the person does not care about him or herself at all. After years of meditation, the body and the mind becomes intolerable to invulnerable to (intolerable is the same as たまらない, so it doesn't fit here) one's own anger or any restless emotions. When such training starts to take effect, you will be observant of your own emotions and slowly but firmly will start to have a much better control over your emotions which only consume your energy. In several prisons they have introduced meditation techniques not only for the prisoners but also for the coworkers. At the end of the ten day session, all participants were embracing each other, realizing that they were all equal and one. There should be restrictions a restriction of gun purchases like it was done in Australia which had produced very positive results. In my country, it would be a very scary idea to even imagine that there would be a gun in our drawer.

すごい！！！Bananacreampieさん、えいごをじょうずにはなせます。 You were able to convey your message quite well, although, there are still several incorrect grammar points and misused words. But a very good job.