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My Experience Today is my first day in this network social. I have known new people that have the same interesting in learn english like me and i wait to continue talk about with more people for improve my english.

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My Experience

 

Today is my first day in this network social.

--in English, "social" should come before "network."

---->Today is my first day in this social network.

 

I have known new people

--"met" or "found," not "known."

---->I have met new people

that have the same interesting in learn english like me

--"interest," not "interesting"

--"learning", not "learn

--in English, names of language and adjectives for countries are capitalized, just like the names of the countries themselves

--you need a comma before "like me"

---->that have the same interest in learning English, like me

and i wait to continue talk about with more people for improve my english.

--The personal pronoun "I" is always capitalized

--In English, there are two separate words, "wait" and "hope." "Wait" means some time is going to pass before something happens. "I'm waiting for the water to boil," "I'm waiting for the traffic light to change." "Hope" means something good that you wish will happen. 

--"improve" is a verb and you need the infinitive, which is formed with "to"

---->and I hope to continue talking with more people to improve my English. 

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Welcome David! I like this page because I practice my english talking with nice people around the world.

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