A nice day

Today, it was a nice day spent with my relatives. [Se non ci fosse la virgola, il "it" non sarebbe necessario. Che strano, di solito devo correggere gli italiani che dimenticano il "it!" "Today, it was a nice day," o "Today was a nice day."]
I went to visit my aunt and my cousins.
Especially my aunt who has been sick recently because she is fighting aganist a bad diesase.

[Non è la buona idea cominciare la frase con "especially" e omettere il verbo. Si può dire "I especially wanted to see my aunt..." Naturalmente, nella conversazione, a volte, il verbo è insinuato.]
I wanted to go to her home and trying to upraise her low mood. [Esito un po' perché "raise" e "lower" non sono i verbi che si usano spesso con "mood." Di solito si dice "to improve her bad mood" o "to raise her low spirits."]
I also greeted my cousins because they are leaving by the end of month.
They work far from their home, so iI decided to visiting them before their departure.
We see each other a few times during the year. It's a little sad thing.
They also gave me some presents, and iI was very happy to receive them.
Then, iI played with their lovelly little dog, called "Dea".
At the beginning of my visit, Dea didn't recognise me a lotmuch, but then she came to me looking for something to eat. In that moment i Just then, I was eating some choccolate cake made by my cousin., [In Inglese, l'espressione "in quello momento" non è molto usata. Non è sbagliata ma suona abbastanza formale e un po' maldestra.]  the flavor wasIt tasted good and i complimented her.
Then we went together into the garden to have somea look atto the growing vegetables, but we remained only a littleshort time because the weather was too hot. [Megio "we stayed"]
Back indoors [Meglio "inside"] we had somea chat about the lastest news in our lifeslives.
I said goodbye to them just a few minutes after midday.
Backing oOn the way home, iI stopped to do some shopping.
In the afternoon, iI decided to go to the seae for a little swimming,. tThe water was very pleasant.
Tomorrow iI would like to comego back to the beach again. [o "to return to the beach, again."]