holidays
A few years ago, I went to Tenerife on holidays. It was the first time I traveled by plane and I don't have a good memory of good. I traveled with my husband and my daughter. My daughter was one years old and she didn't stop crying. We were desperate and we didn't know what do. Finally we could calm her and continue the journey better.
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Holidays
A few years ago, I went to Tenerife on holidays. It was the first time I had travelled by plane and I don't have a good memory of it. I travelled with my husband and my daughter. My daughter was one years old and she didn't stop crying. We were desperate and we didn't know what do. Finally we calmed her down and the journey was better.
Hello Sara,
Travelling with children can be bad for your nerves but if you are calm then the baby will be calm - they take their attitude from those closest to her.
In the second sentence we are talking about an experience to a point in time in the past so here we use the past perfect - had + past participle. Just a few other small mistakes
Hope this helps
Bob
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It is the good history.
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