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Dear diary Three Day Trip--The Second Dear diary: I'm so tired today. We climbed a high mountain called Tian You Feng. There were many people, and the steps were too narrow, so sometimes we have to wait. But the feeling was great! However that's not the best part, we rode on a bamboo raft in the afternoon, we saw many stone mountains. I played water with a girl, she is funny I think. Then we came to St. Song , it was fun. But I have to stop writing now, because time is running out. So, good night! Boring day (a girl's diary) Dear diary: This day is pretty boring, because I have nothing to do except doing homework and eat some snakes.I sill have a few days left before going to school again,but I can't wait to meet my classmates.I miss them.And if anyone reads the diary,I wish you won't think it silly,but a true diary,a true image of a only ten-year-old girl's life.Maybe it has many mistakes,but please forgive me.It is not easy for a Chinese girl to write so many words.Now,I should stop writing,because I've said too much!Bye! A dinner with a friend Dear diary: Today a friend of my parents' came.She is beautiful.She has short hair and smart eyes on a pretty face. She sat down on the sofa and talked with my parents for a long time.They seemed to be very happy.Later,we went to a new restaurant.The food was delicious,but I seemed to eat rather much.But still,I enjoyed being with her,because she was very funny.On the way back home,I talked a lot,I just can't stop myself!By the way,she has an Apple Watch! I like it very very much!Good night! Life is a race,and don't lose at the starting line 'Life is a race,and don't lose at the starting line.'I bet everyone know that,and because of this,many children have to go to other lessons.Math classes,piano lessons,and a hole bunch of lessons.And pressure is adding on children's shoulders.Maybe it's right to make children go to have lessons,but I don't want to add the pressure.Oh,and please remember that you have play sometimes,only study and no play will make you dull and unpopular.Now,it's time to tell you that I'm a student,not a parent.So dear diary,there's one thing left, I have been on italki for some time,but it seems that no one have commented about my articles, so if you saw this,please comment on all my articles.Thank you.

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' . . and a hole bunch of lessons' : and a whole lot of lessons 'whole' not 'hole'; 'bunch' is American, 'a lot of' is more general. ' . . no one have commented' : no one has commented 'has' not 'have' 'so if you saw this . .' : so if you have seen this . . 'have seen' not 'saw' I think the reason why no-one has commented may be that they don't believe that this can all be your own work, because it's too well-written for someone of your age.

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