apparently this doesn't do line breaks. all those ------------- are supposed to be new lines

I had another couple of possible corrections, but I wasn't sure if they were intended to be written the way they are or not, but I'll mention them so you can check yourself, just in case: "She went with me to learn" - from the topic of the entry, it sounds like you mean either 1) Both of you went there so that both of you could train (practicing or learning to do something) OR 2) You, helen, went there so that your vice-chairman could train you. -------------------- business chargeman - there are no job descriptions called this, that I am aware of, and I'm not entirely sure what you might mean by it. Could you describe what his job is possibly? Maybe I could recognize the description and tell you what it is. ---------------- four series products - I think what you want here is "a series of four products" but I wasn't certain. Looking back at it now, though, I am fairly certain (now) that it is what you meant. :P --------------- 1101#, 1102#, 1103#, 1104# - If you mean "number 1101, number 1102" etc, normally the # is in the front: #1101, #1102 etc. But if your company specifically designates them the way you have them typed, then it's perfectly fine to leave them the way they are. ----------- flame color - I wouldn't have said anything, except for the fact that you said 'flame colored number candle,' and I thought a fire styled candle was a little odd (or maybe it's just me! :P ) anyway, does it look like fire? If it's just a solid color, you might be looking for "orange." ------------ I missed a correction: it should say "three main ways of packing," (note the comma at the end of that) ------------- Sorry if it seems like a lot - I like to be thorough :) You already seem to be getting a handle on English fairly well, compared to the Chinese people that I know. :)