Cover letter for a job of my dream (WHO CAN HELP ME TO CHECK ?))

Dear Sir or Madam,

I read with great interest your advertisement (it would be normal here to specify where you saw the advert) for a Sales Representative at **** with great interest. For a moment I'm looking for a position in marketing area because it is a field where I want to be challenged in, and where I can use all my knowleges, professional skills and potential on maximum level.
I have been successful in my current role and I am looking for my next challenge and I believe that my skills will be very useful and trasnsferable to the role of Sales Representative.
I have been working in the tourism industry for the last six years, and I spent the last three years working exclusively in the VIP segment of the travel industry. Currently I'm working as a Sales & Reservation Manager in for one of the biggest Russia's Travel Agencies in Russia. In the attachement to this letter you will find my CV.
For the last six years I have been working in the tourism industry, advancing into the specialist sector of VIP travel. I have attached my CV for your perusal.
During this time I became an experienced Sales & Reservation Manager who can work one-on-one with high-end affluent clients who demand an impeccable level of service. I was able to understand what clients want, and the instruments of working with them, I've established the extensive global trade connections all over the world and I've also been able to set up reliable contacts with Russian travel agencies, partners, hotels and other suppliers who are involved in the luxury travel market.
I deal with clients that expect impeccable service and professionalism, I understand their requirements and know how to ensure everything goes smoothly. I have established professional contacts in all related businesses, Travel Agents, Hotels, Business Partners and other suppiers.
During my work experience I was successful not only in the sales area but and also in marketing. I'm experienced in creating a development strategy, developing a marketing tool-kit, participating in trade-shows, organization of organising business events, developing and maintaining a database of travel trade partners, creating marketing reports, and making sales calls.

Having this experience including both Business-to-Business and Business-to-Consumer, understanding of luxury travel market, hospitality industry, being hardworking with can-do attitude, I believe, allows me superbly to accomplish the tasks required of a Sales Representative at ***.
My experience of dealing with business and personal clients in the travel sector, together with my 'can do' attitude and willingness to work hard means I am ideally suited for your vacancy.
By the way I'm deeply inspired by ***. For me it is a dream to work at *** and to become an asset to your company. I have an unrelenting desire to move forward, learn new skills and grow in a dynamic team of like-minded and dedicated professionals. It will be a great pleasure for me if you would be so kind as to make an appointment for personal meeting in order to discuss the possibility of me joining the ***.

I have been inspired by *** and it has been a dream for me to become part of the success for the future. I hope you will schedule an interview so that we can discuss how I can make a contribution to your team of like-minded and dedicated professionals."

Firstly, Kristina, you should write a cover letter with the emphasis on what you can do for them, not what they can do for you. You always have to consider that they may have many similar applications and you need to tell them what they want to hear, concisely.

When there is an advert, go through it in sequence, answering everything they have listed in a way that shows you can do the job, have the relevant experience and have a plan to progress.

I have corrected errors and made suggestions that you might consider. Good luck.

Cover letter for my dream job (who can check this for me?)

Cover letter for a job of my dream (WHO CAN HELP ME TO CHECK ?))

Dear Sir or Madam,

I read your advertisement for a Sales Representative at **** with great interest. For the a moment, i'm looking for a position in the marketing area because it is a field where i want to be challenged in and where I can use all my knowlege, professional skills and potential on a maximum level.

I have been working in the tourism industry for the last six years, and I spent the last three years working exclusively in the VIP segment of the travel industry. Currently i'm working as a Sales&Reservation Manager in one of the biggest Russia's(n) Travel Agencies. (move below) Attached In the attachement to this letter you will find my CV. (move below)

During this time i have become became an experienced Sales&Reservation Manager who can work one-on-one with high-end affluent clients, who demand an impeccable level of service. I am was able to understand what clients want and the instruments of working with them, I've established the extensive global trade connections all over the world and i've also been able to set up reliable contacts with Russian travel agencies, partners, hotels and other suppliers who are involved in the luxury travel market.

During my work experience I was successful, not only in the sales area but and also in marketing. I'm experinced in; creating development strategies, developing marketing tool-kits, participation in trade-shows, organization of business events, developing and maintaining databases of travel trade partners, creating marketing reports and making sales calls.

Having this experience, including both Business-to-Business and Business-to-Consumer, I have an understanding of the luxury travel market and the hospitality industry. I am also being hardworking with a can-do attitude and I believe this allows me superbly to accomplish the tasks required of a Sales Representative at *** accurately and to full extent. 

By the way I'm also deeply inspired by ***. For me it is a dream to work at *** and to become an asset to your company. I have an unrelenting desire to move forward, learn new skills and grow in a dynamic team of like-minded and dedicated professionals. It will be a great pleasure for if I were able to have me if you would be so kind as to make an appointment for a personal meeting, in order to discuss the possibility of me joining the ***.

' Attached In the attachement to this letter you will find my CV. '

Yours faithfully 

(name)