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I have discovered this singer when I was around twelve. Mylene farmer’s real name is Mylene Gauthier. She changed her name to Mylène Farmer so that it would sound like the name of her idol, (1930's) the Hollywood actress Frances Farmer. Mylene was born on September 12, 1961, in Quebec, Canada . Since she was young, she has been dreaming of becoming an actress.At the age of 17, she took classes at the « cours Florent » in Paris. And it wasn't until 1984, that Mylene has begun her journey in the music world.In an audition, she has choosen to sing a track that's called « Maman a tort » produced by laurent Boutonnat. « Libertine » is the song that made her famous in 1986. In her clips, she was naked and there was a polemic. Mylene adopted a look that was very different and strange with her long red hair. The track "Tristana" was the second track that had a great success. This clip was like a small movie, it lasted for 11 minutes,and it was the only clip where Mylene spoke in the russian language.
Year after year, Mylene has become a real successful singer, everybody knew her, and she has built her self a veritable empire, a character who regrouped millions of fans.For years she had been the singer with the most selling records in France(30 millions).She was also well-know in East of Europe. Mylene was really quiet, as her tracks, completely nostalgic and melancholic.Today, We can't see Mylene in gossips news or tv shows, it's also rare to see her outside too. She's only present during  award nominations. Mylène Farmer is known to have a very private life.


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I discovered this singer when I was  about twelve years old. Mylene farmer’s real name is mylene Gauthier. She changed her name to Mylène Farmer in order to look like her idol, (1930's) the Hollywood actress Frances Farmer. Mylene was born 12 September 1961, in Quebec, in Canada . When she was young, she dreamt of being an actress and at the age of 17, she took classes at the « cours Florent » in Paris. And it was only later, in 1984, that Mylene started in the music world. She went to an audition, and she had to choose to sing a track called « Maman a tort » produced by laurent Boutonnat. « Libertine » is a song that made her famous in 1986. In her clips, she was naked and there was a controversy. Mylene adopted a look that was very different and strange, long red hair, very different from other singers. The track "Tristana" is the second track that met with great success. This clip is like a small movie, lasting 11 minutes, it’s the only clip where mylene speaks in russian. 

Years later, Mylene has become a really successful singer, everybody knows her, and she has build a veritable empire, a character who has millions of fans. People are really fans of this singer. She has become a singer who sells the most records in France. (30 millions) But she also very well-known in Eastern Europe. Mylene is really quiet, she has adopted a very strange life style, as her tracks evoke, full of  nostalgia and melancholia. We don’t see her in gossipy news or tv shows, it's rather rare to see her outside too. She's only present when there are TV awards. Mylène Farmer is known to have a very private life that we know nothing about. 

I discovered this singer when I was around twelve. Mylene Farmer’s real name is Mylene Gauthier. She changed her name to Mylène Farmer in order to look like to her idol, (1930's) the Hollywood actress who name is Frances Farmer. Mylene was born on 12 September 1961, in Quebec, in Canada. When she was young, she dreamed of being an actress and at the age of 17, she took classes at the « cours Florent » in Paris. And it was only after, in 1984, that Mylene was in the music world. In an audition, she had choose to sing a track that is called « Maman a tort » produced by laurent Boutonnat. « Libertine » is a song that made her famous in 1986. In her clips, she was naked and there was a polemic. Mylene adopted a very different look and strange, long red hair, very different from other singers. The track "Tristana" is the second track that had great success. This clip is like a small movie, it lasts for 11 minutes, it’s the only one clip where mylene speaks in the Russian language. 

Year after year, Mylene has become a real successful singer, everybody knows her, and she has built a veritable empire, a character who regroups millions of fans. People are really fans of this singer. For years she is a singer who sells the most records in France. (30 million) But she also very well-known in Eastern Europe. Mylene is really quiet, she has developed a very strange life style, as in her tracks, completely nostalgic and melancholic. We can't see her in gossip news or tv shows, it's rather rare to see her outside too. She's only present when there are TV awards. Mylène Farmer is known to have a very private life and we don’t know anything about her private life.

Singer!

Please, could you give it a shot :

I discovered this singer when I was around twelve around years of age. Mylene Farmer’s real name is Mylene Gauthier. She changed her name to Mylène Farmer in order to look like as a tribute to her idol, the 1930's the Hollywood actress, who names Frances Farmer. Mylene was born on the 12th of September 1961, in Quebec, in Canada . When she was young, she has been dreaming to be had always dreamed of becoming an actress and at the age of 17, she took classes at the « cours Florent » in Paris. And It's only after later in 1984, that Mylene has been begining made her start in the music world. She spend received an audition and she has choose chose to sing a track that calls called « Maman a tort » produced by laurent Boutonnat. « Libertine » is a the song that give to her to become famous gave Mylene her rise to fame in 1986. In her clips, she was naked and there was a controversy. Mylene adopts a look very different and strange, long red hair, very differents not typical of others singers. The track "Tristana" is the second track who met a which was welcomed with great success. This clip is like a small movie, it during for with a duration of 11 minutes, it’s the only one clip where mylene speaks in the Russian language.
Years after years, Mylene has been becoming striving as a really successful singer, everybody knows her, and she has build built a veritable genuine / undoubted empire, a character who regroups millions of fans. People are really genuine fans of this singer. Since For many years she is a singer who sells the most records in France. (30 millions) But she also very well-know in the East of Europe. Mylene is really quiet timid/shy, she has been builting created a very strange secluded lifestyle for herself, as in her tracks are completely nostalgic and melancholia. We can't don't see her in gossip news or tv shows, it's rather rare to see her outside too. She's only present when there are TV awards tv. Mylène Farmer is known to have a very private life and we don’t know nothing much about her private life which we don't know much about.


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Just said I would add another to the three great corrections you already have :)

Very good article - Translation to English is good, alot of my corrections are small re-phrases only - Nice work!