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My first note - More about me Hi everyone, I'm my first note, I will write about my family. As I wrote in my profile, I'm from Brazil. I have no brothers, but I have two sisters. Both are older than me. My parents are Almiro Reis (father) and Maria Angelica (mother). They lives in Santa Catarina too. I have two daughters, but I'm not married. The name of the older is Maria Luiza and she's 9. Amanda Luiza (the second one) have only three years old. I have an aunt living in USA. She works as a babysitter since she arrived on that country. For a first note, I believe is that enough. I promisse to be more interesting in a future notes. Thanks for atention.

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My first note - More about me

Hi everyone,

I'm In my first note, I will write about my family.

As I wrote in my profile, I'm from Brazil.

I have no brothers, but I have two sisters. Both are older than me.

My parents are Almiro Reis (father) and Maria Angelica (mother). They lives in Santa Catarina too.

I have two daughters, but I'm not married. The name of the older one is Maria Luiza and she's 9. Amanda Luiza (the second one) have is only three years old.

I have an aunt living in USA. She works has worked as a babysitter since she arrived on that country.

For a first note, I believe that is that enough. I promisse to be more interesting in a future notes.

Thanks for the attention.

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My First Note - More About Me

 

Hi everyone! In my first note, I will write about my family.

As I wrote in my profile, I'm from Brazil.

I have no brothers, but I have two sisters. Both are older than me.

My parents are Almiro Reis (father) and Maria Angelica (mother). They live in Santa Catarina, too.

I have two daughters, but I'm not married. The name of my eldest daughter is Maria Luiza and she's nine. Amanda Luiza (the second one) is only three.

I have an aunt living in the USA. She has been working as a baby sitter since she has arrived in the USA. 

For a first note, I believe that is enough. I promise to be more interesting in future notes.

Thanks for your attention!

1

My first note - More about me

Hi everyone,

I'm This is my first note, I will write about my family.

As I wrote in my profile, I'm from Brazil. I have no brothers, but I have two sisters, both are older than me. My parents are Almiro Reis (father) and Maria Angelica (mother). They lives in Santa Catarina too.

I have two daughters, but I'm not married. The name of the older one is Maria Luiza and she's 9. Amanda Luiza, the youngest is, (the second one) have only three years old.

I have an aunt living in the USA. She has worked works as a babysitter since she arrived there. on that country.

For a first note, I believe this is is that enough. I promisse to be more interesting in a future notes.

Thanks for reading atention.

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