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I made a cake
today I made a chocolate cake !
because i really (really like) love chocolate (I love chocolate too :3 )
it tasted good and delicious
but i m getting fat ;-(
mom always says to me
"do you try to lose your weight ??" ( you should try to lose weight) (or was it a question ?)
when I listen to these words (or when I hear these words)
i feel scared that i will be fat ... (I get scared of becoming fat)
okay, let me think about my weight
I am 151 cm tall and my weight is about 45
i've gained 5kg during the last 6 monthes (it sounds better this way)
maybe i think that i graduated from my club activity
what do you think about my weight ??
Am I too fat or fat ??
i wanna want to know what you think about it ! ( we don't use ''wanna'' when we're writing)
please leave a comment !
you can calculate your BMI to see if you're over-weight or not
so (45/1.51^2) =19.73
which means you are not fat , your weight is normal since it's between 18.5 and 25 :)
but if you want to work out there is no harm to get in shape :)
Made a Cake
Today I made a chocolate cake because I really like chocolate!
It was delicious.
However, I'm getting fat.
My mother always says to me, "Do you try to lose weight?"
When I hear these words, I'm scared that I'll become fat.
Okay, let me think about my weight.
My height is is 151cm and my weight is about 45kg.
I gained 5kg in the past six months.
Maybe it's because I graduated from my club activity.
What do you think about my weight?
Am I too fat?
I want to know what you think about it.
Please comment!
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