my bday

Today I had only one wish - to have my family here with me now (I would leave out now - though it still makes sense with it in, it seems a bit clumsy. Since you're talking about a specific moment in time - 'today' - I don't think it's necessary). Funny, because I always wanted to be somewhere far away on my birthday. wWell, dreams come true... But the life sentd to me kind people being around me, who really treat me well and they did their best to not make me feel lonely today, so nevertheless I had my birthday homemade cake...and I appreciate it. (With each new sentence, it's best to use a capital! Also, in this context 'sent' is better then 'send', because you are talking in the past tense - to send something is present tense :) Try to avoid 'the life'; use 'the -----' for nounds that could only refer to one objective thing, such as 'the dog', when talking about one specific dog you saw. In this case, everyone has their own life, and not everyone can understand/see your life - it's not an object - so the 'the' before it doesn't quite work. Does that make sense? It's also not necessary to say 'being around me', because it's implied that your friends are with you, and the tense is a little wrong; you can't 'be around something', but you can 'be at/in ---'; a better way of putting it is 'to surround ----', which has the same meaning.)

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I hope this all makes sense and helps you! If any of my explanations aren't clear, let me know and I can try and make them easier to understand.