Torii
Torii is one of the Japanese religious symbol object.But at the US base in Japan, they apply it as troop's trade mark,while making big object designed after shape of torii and putting it on the front of base's gate or even at the their church.They seems to consider torii as not religious but novelty.
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Torii
A torii is a one of the Japanese religious symbol object. However, But at the US Army base in (Okinawa) Japan, they apply use it as the troop's trade mark, and while making have a big object designed after in the shape of a torii in and putting it on the front of the base's gate, or and even have one at the their church. They seems to consider torii as a novelty rather than a not religious symbol but novelty.
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A torii is a Japanese religious symbol. However, at the US Army base in Okinawa, Japan, they use it as the troop's trade mark, and have a big object in the shape of a torii in front of the base's gate, and even have one at their church. They seem to consider torii as a novelty rather than a religious symbol.
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Very nice writing! I've made a few suggestions to make it sound more natural. Also, it seems a bit rude or insensitive of the US Army to use a torii shape like that!
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