the night
In the silence night, the wind are bolwing. the door are knoching by wind. All the objects have life in this monent. The world in the dark cloud is shouting. He told every people that he has life, and much alive in the different way. No one notice this.all the people have been blowed to house, because they fear of this. The power of the nature is very strong. no one can aontrol it. If you want to excel if ,you will be punish.
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The Night
In the silent night, the wind blowing. The doors knocking by the wind. All objects have life in this moment. The world in the dark cloud is shouting. He told all the people that he has life, and much alive in the different way. No one noticed this. All the people have been blowed to house, because they fear of this. The power of the nature is very strong. No one can control it. If you want to excel ,you will be punished.
"He told all the people that he has life, and much alive in the different way" -This needs to be changed but because this is in verse - I suspect that it is a parable - I don't want to change so much, because maybe your meaning will be lost. Do you mean to say, 'He told everybody that he was alive, very much alive, but in a very different way.' ?
In the silent night, the wind blowing. The doors knocking by the wind. All objects have life in this moment. The world in the dark cloud is shouting. He told all the people that he has life, and much alive in the different way. No one noticed this. All the people have been blowed to house, because they fear of this. The power of the nature is very strong. No one can control it. If you want to excel ,you will be punished.
"He told all the people that he has life, and much alive in the different way" -This needs to be changed but because this is in verse - I suspect that it is a parable - I don't want to change so much, because maybe your meaning will be lost. Do you mean to say, 'He told everybody that he was alive, very much alive, but in a very different way.' ?
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the night
In the silence night, the wind are bolwing. the door are knocking by wind. All the objects have life in this monent. The world in the dark cloud is shouting. He told every people that he has life, and much alive in the different way. No one notice this.all the people have been blowed to house, because they fear of this. The power of the nature is very strong. no one can aontrol it. If you want to excel it, you will be punish.Want to progress faster?
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