today I was singing with my friend
Today,I sing some songs with my friends.in Karaoke place.Cause today is weekend,I can relax a whole day.at 9:00 am. I clean the bathroom and fitting room.then I take a shower. about after 1 hour. I ate the lunch.Maybe someone think that is very boring. Actually this is most Chinese weekends. Even me..
So I want to know do you like musics?what is musics do you like? I like popular musics. sometimes I will cry when I listened some sad musics.And I always listen music once I feel happy.my friends always said:"you're crazy."I know I am crazy.But why not. Music is good.you can feel happy from that.So let's love musics!!!
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Today, I sang some songs with my friends at a Karaoke place. Since it’s the weekend, I can relax the whole day. At 9:00 am, I cleaned my bathroom and fitting room, and then I took a shower. Around an hour later, I ate lunch. Some people might think that this is very boring, but it is actually a typical Chinese weekend, including mine.
So I would like to know, do you like music? If so, what type of music do you like? I like popular music. Sometimes I cry when I listen to some sad music.
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Today I was singing with my friend
Today, I was singing some songs with my friends at a Karaoke place. Since today is weekend, I can relax for the whole day. At 9:00 am, I cleaned the bathroom and fitting room, then I take a shower. After about 1 hour I ate the lunch. Maybe some people think that is very boring. Actually this is most Chinese weekends. Even mine..
So I want to know, do you like music? What is music do you like? I like popular music. Sometimes I will cry when I listened some sad music and I always listen to music once I feel happy. My friends always say "you're crazy." I know I am crazy, but why not? Music is good.You can feel happy from that. So let's love music!!!
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It is actually acceptable to use because and and to start a sentence as they link to another clause, so as long as you write a full, complete sentence it is fine.
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When you talk about what you did today or yesterday ... You have to use past tense: sang a song, took a shower... Nice try anyway :)
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not with I meant without. Sorry!!
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