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Task: write a report about use of money for school improvements (FCE) INVEST OF MONEY ON SCHOOL IMPROVEMENTS The aim of this report is to study the possible invests -buying more computers and improving the library- and compare their advantages to suggest the best option. The information comes from interviews with a vast majority of students. BUYING MORE COMPUTERS Among all the received responses, those that told about invest on buying more computers agreed on the following list of advantages: 1. Computers are quicker at searching information. 2. They can be used to play games that help the learning. 3. They are needed to do writing practices. Despite that, other students said they preferred to use their own computers. IMPROVING THE LBIRARY Most people seemed to feel that this was the advantageous choice and gave the following reasons: 1. Most students do not have an appropriate place for studying so the library is the best option. However, there is not place enough for all students in exam week. 2. The books and encyclopedias seemed to be out-to-date. 3. There are books so consulted that the wait for them to borrow is too large. Copies of the books are needed. RECOMMENDATIONS Both ideas have benefits, but the best part of interviewed students felt improving the library is most needed to the school and its users. I also support this choice.

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Task: write a report about use of money for school improvements (FCE)

INVEST OF MONEY ON SCHOOL IMPROVEMENTS

The aim of this report is to study the possible invests -buying more computers and improving the library- and compare their advantages to suggest the best option. The information comes from interviews with a vast majority of students.

BUYING MORE COMPUTERS
Amongst all the received responses, those that talked about investments related to buying more computers agreed on the following list of advantages:
1. Computers are quicker at searching information.
2. They can be used to play games that help the learning.
3. They are needed to do writing practices.
Despite that, other students said they preferred to use their own computers.

IMPROVING THE LIBRARY
Most people seemed to feel that this was the advantageous choice and gave the following reasons:
1. Most students do not have an appropriate place for studying so the library is the best option. However, there is not enough place for all students during exam week.
2. The books and encyclopedias seemed to be out-of-date.
3. There are books so consulted that the wait time for them to borrow is too long. Copies of the books are needed.

RECOMMENDATIONS
Both ideas have benefits, but the best part of interviewing students felt like improving the library is most needed top priority to the school and its users.
I also support this choice.

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