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A story about cats
All my life I have had cats. When I was young my family had 3 cats. But 7 years ago I left my parent and left to another city. I didn't have an opportunity buy a cat. And 10 months ago I bought a cat. She was small,very small. I gave her the name Jesse. To be continued.
Don't forget , 1 cat, 2 cats (cats is the plural, meaning more than 1). There are many ways to write in English as you see from previous corrections, 'I left my city' or 'I left to another city' are both correct, but I think the last one is better. As for the next sentence 'I got a cat' could be correct, but I think it sounds better if you say you bought (buy in the past tense) unless it was a stray cat (homeless) then got would be better. About the cats name, 'I gave her the name' is closest to what you wrote (although both the others 'I named her' and 'I called her' are correct). Hope this helps.
Story about cat
All my life I have had cats. When I was young my family had 3 cats. But 7 years ago I left my parents and left my city. I didn't have the opportunity to buy a cat. And 10 montes ago I had a cat. She was small, very small. I named her Jesse. To be continued...
A Story about cats
For all my life I have been having cats. When I was young my family had 3 cats. But 7 years ago I left my parent and left for other city. I didn't have an opportunity to buy a cat. And 10 mounthes ago I had a cat. It was small,very small. I called it Jesse. To be continued
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