introducing myself

Hı! My name is ilknur. I am from Turkey. I am twenty years old. I am a student. I AM learning English.

Introducing myself

Hı! My name is Ilknur. I am from Turkey. I am twenty years old. I am a student. I am learning English.

Something all the above people forgot, the title needs a capital letter, much like the start of a new sentence. Names are always capitalised, as with countries/languages such as Phillip, Ilknur, Spain, Spanish. Next is 'I learning' this can be fixed in a few ways as shown by others, either 'I'm learning' or 'I am learning'.

Other than that it's decent, to improve I think you should try writing longer sentences rather than just a few words. You can use a comma (this ,) to give the sentence a little pause as you'll see I have numerous times. But short sentences are usually really boring/repetative when reading, it's like reading a list, I am, I am. To add variety you can use words like and which join sentences. An example, My name is Phillip, I'm a 24 year old male and a native English speaker, currently I only speak English but I am trying to learn Italian. I highlighted the words/punctuation I used to 'prolong' the sentence, hopefully you understand and can practice this yourself. Well done and good luck learning, sorry about the length of this message.

introducing myself

Hi, my name is Jlknur. I am from Turkey. I am twenty years old. I am a student. I am learning English.

introducing myself

Hı! My name is ilknur. I am from Turkey. I am twenty years old. I am a student. I am learning English.

introducing myself

Hı! My name is ilknur. I am from Turkey. I am twenty years old. I am a student. I'm learning English