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please correct me,and if you have some advices,give me them,it will be cool Changing society needs to start with ourselves the first Nowadays,Many people complain about their situation that they live, thier suffers and the pain that they spent,those who do not have job, those who are homelss in street,those who are sick and they do not find mony for buyingmedicaments,.... All these problems and others,pushs a lot of people to blame, either,the state, thier familly and society in general.But, I think it’s so unfair to blame others and to make them guilties without talking about our mistakes, because as human beigns, we are not perfect,we have also a side mistake in our life,Therfore,changing society needs colaboration with a lot of parts, state of course as the first participant, famillies and ourselves as too,as kenidy’s citation’’ask not what your cuntry can do for you,ask what you can do for your cuntry.So,if everyone think like this way,in that case,we can build a strong society that it would be able to face all these problems without complaining.

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please correct me, and if you have some advices, give me them, it will be cool

Changing society needs to start with ourselves the (first) 
Nowadays, many people complain about their situation/the situation in which that they live, their sufferings and the pain that they have/feel spent, those who do not have a job, those who are homeless, in the street, those who are sick and they do not find have money for buying medicineaments,....
All these problems and others pushs a lot of people to blame either the state, their familly and or society in general. But I think it’s so unfair to blame others and to make them guiltyies without talking about our mistakes, because as human beings, we are not perfect, we have also a side mistakes in our life. Therefore, changing society needs collaboration with by many/a lot of parts, the State, of course, as the first participant, famillies and ourselves as too. As Kennedy’s citation ’’ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country". So if everyone thinks like this/in this way, (in that case,) we can build a strong society that it would be able to face all these problems without complaining.

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