2015年8月19日 － 我最爱的菜

我今天给你们关于我最爱吃的菜写。

我今天会写一些东西，关于我最爱吃的菜。Often we haibitually don't say 'write sth to sb', 'write sth' is okay. Or you can say '我今天会写....[noun]'+'你可以看看。'.

当我的旅行我已经吃过很多杂国家的风味的菜。

在旅行中，我吃过很多个国家的特色菜。eat/ate is '吃/吃过'.

比如我去了柬埔寨的时候我甚至吃了一个捕鸟蛛（确实非常美味）。

比如，我在柬埔寨的时候，甚至吃了一个捕鸟蛛 （事实上美味极了）。'even' here should be '甚至'.

可是我觉得中国菜、越南菜和日本菜都好吃极了。

我认为/觉得，中国菜、越南菜和日本菜都非常好吃。

在中国我特别喜欢吃饺子和包子。我发现点心和面条也很不错。

我特别喜欢吃中国的饺子和包子。我发现点心和面条也很不错。

可是毫无疑问，我的最爱的中国菜当然是北京烤鸭！

不过毫无疑问，我最爱吃的中国菜当然是北京烤鸭。

你觉得中国里的最好吃的是什么？

你觉得最好吃的中国菜是什么？

下次见！亚瑟

下次再见。亚瑟。

BTW:

The sentences marked green are what I may use.

------ Written + transcribed, 25 minutes

Today I'm going to write to you about my favorite foods.

During my travels I've eat the local specialties from various countries.

For example, whilst I was in Cambodia I even ate a tarantula (actually quite delicious)!

But I think Chinese food, Vietnamese food and Japanese food are extremely tasty.

In China I especially like to eat jiaozi and baozi. I also quite like dim sum and noodles.

But without a doubt my favorite Chinese dish is (of course) Beijing roast duck!

What do you think is the tastiest dish in China?

See you next time! Arthur

2015年8月19日 － 我最爱的菜

我今天给你们关于我最爱吃的菜写。

First, the verb has to be put in front of the object. '写' is an action not concerning the content of what you wrote down， like ‘写字’. '字' means just the character. Here you mean you want to talk about something. So you may use '说说' or ‘介绍一些’. but if you put '一些' in your scentence, '最‘ must be removed. Because '最’ means only one, but ‘一些’ means a few.

我今天给你们介绍一些关于我爱吃的菜。

当我的旅行我已经试了很多杂国家的风味的菜。

‘当’ always specified just a moment or a short period of time in your travels. But you tried a lot which means you cannot taste all of them once. During can be translated as '在。。。中' here.

在我的旅行中，我已经试了很多杂国家的风味的菜。

比如，我去了柬埔寨的时候我连吃了一个只捕鸟蛛（确实非常美味）。

可是我觉得中国菜，越南菜和日本在都好吃极了。

在中国菜中，我特别喜欢吃饺子和包子。我发现电信点心和面条也很不错。

'在中国' is not specific enough here. It means everything in China, or someone or somethings' location is China. And I don't think you wouldn't like Chinese food, if you were not in China. So, we add '菜' after '中国'~~~

'电信' is telecommunications in Chinese. And I doubt whether it is eatable~~~

可是我的毫无疑问最爱的中国菜当然是北京烤鸭！

If we put '毫无疑问' in the front of this scentence, it would be more native. Also, '毫无疑问' and ‘当然’ have a similar meaning here. And '毫无疑问' is really good if you want to express how much you like 北京烤鸭. So, 毫无疑问, we keep '毫无疑问' here! 

可是，毫无疑问，我最爱的中国菜是北京烤鸭！

你觉得中国菜里的最好吃的是什么？

下次见！亚瑟

Your Chinese is excellent! And your travels seem so interesting~~~

------ Written + transcribed, 25 minutes

Today I'm going to write to you about my favorite foods.

During my travels I've eat the local specialties from various countries.

For example, whilst I was in Cambodia I even ate a tarantula (actually quite delicious)!

But I think Chinese food, Vietnamese food and Japanese food are extremely tasty.

In China I especially like to eat jiaozi and baozi. I also quite like dim sum and noodles.

But without a doubt my favorite Chinese dish is (of course) Beijing roast duck!

What do you think is the tastiest dish in China?

See you next time! Arthur

2015年8月19日 － 我最爱的菜

我今天给你们说说关于我最爱吃的菜。

在我的旅行中，我已经试吃了很多国家的风味菜。

比如：我去了柬埔寨的时候我吃了一个捕鸟蛛（确实非常美味）。

可是我觉得中国菜，越南菜和日本菜都好吃极了。

在中国我特别喜欢吃饺子和包子。我发现面线和面条也很不错。

可是，我最爱的中国菜是北京烤鸭！

你觉得中国菜里最好吃的是什么？

下次见！亚瑟

------ Written + transcribed, 25 minutes

Today I'm going to write to you about my favorite foods.

During my travels I've eat the local specialties from various countries.

For example, whilst I was in Cambodia I even ate a tarantula (actually quite delicious)!

But I think Chinese food, Vietnamese food and Japanese food are extremely tasty.

In China I especially like to eat jiaozi and baozi. I also quite like dim sum and noodles.

But without a doubt my favorite Chinese dish is (of course) Beijing roast duck!

What do you think is the tastiest dish in China?

See you next time! Arthur