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Cute Baby
Whenever (When) I look (am looking) at someone's baby (bady's) pictures, I always think to myself how cute their son or daughter is. (are?) Four years ago, I could have (will have) married the father of this baby (with him,) but I was (am) arrogant and bad tempered (temper) at the (that) time. (,) So,he (with another woman got) eventually married another (,) and they have a cute baby now. I often regret the intolerance of my youth. (am regrat for my past bad temper.) Time, however, cannot ever be recalled, we can never turn back the clock! (Time is past, everything couldn't be back.)
I have suggested a few amendments. I guess there are positives and negatives in every situation, so you just need to accentuate the positives!
Cute Baby
When I am looking at someone's baby's pictures, how cute their son/daughter are? Four years ago, I will could have married with him, but I was arrogant and bad tempered at that time, so he with another woman got married with another woman, and have has a cute baby now. I am regretful for my past and being bad tempered. Time passed, anything couldn't be back.
Cute Baby
When I am looking at someone's baby's pictures, how cute their son/daughter are? Four years ago, I will would have married with him, but I am was arrogant and had a bad temper at that time, so he married with another woman got married, and they have a cute baby now. I am now regret for my past bad temper. But the time is has past passed, everything couldn't be and I can't go back.
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我不明白 "When I am looking at someone's baby's pictures, how cute their son/daughter are?" 你能用中文输入嘛
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