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My favorite person my favorite person is my mom, she is a great cooker, a great person a beatiful woman. she is tall, sometimes she yells however she is sweet, my dog makes her crazy because it is a bad dog, i love my mom so so much.

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My favorite person

My favorite person is my mom. She is a great cooker, a great person, and a beatiful woman. She is tall, sometimes she yells, however she is sweet. My dog makes her crazy because it is a bad dog. I love my mom so so much.

 

1. "cooker" means an appliance or a machine - to talk about a person you would say "she is a great cook" or "she is a great chef" or "she cooks really well"

2. I think this is correct, but it would be more interesting to say something more specific like "...because he barks a lot" or "...because he chews the furniture" or even just "...because he behaves badly"

 

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My favorite person

My favorite person is my Mom, she is a great cooker, a great person and a beautiful woman. She is tall and sometimes she yells; however she is sweet. My dog makes her crazy because it is a bad dog,  I love my Mom so so much.

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i also love my mother alot she suffered alot to make us happy i hope she will be proud of me and i really will do my best to make she happy

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