Cold Morning...
Today I got up at four o'clock.I had a shower. After that I had breakfast. Then I left my house.At six o'clock I was waiting for the bus.I had to go to city near my town,five minutes later I got on the bus. I took two hours to get there.
When I got off the bus. It was very cold. I had forgotten my coat. : ( .
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Cold Morning...
Today, I got up at four o'clock. I took a shower. After that I had breakfast. Then I left my house. At six o'clock, I was waiting for the bus. I had to go to city near my town. Five minutes later I got on the bus. It took two hours to get there.
When I got off the bus. It was very cold. I had forgotten my coat. : ( .
How I would write it:
Today, I woke up at 4am, and I took a shower. I ate breakfast, and then I left my house in time to catch the 6am bus to the neighboring city. It took two hours to get there. When I got off the bus, it was very cold and I had forgotten my coat.
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:( I had forgotten my coat. Because I was in hurry. But Today is a new day. It's a sunny. :)
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oooh dear :(
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