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My last weekend Hi Everyone! Today I tell a little bit of my weekend. Well, I and more three friends we went to another city, your name is Pirinópolis and it's very famous in Brazil because have beautiful waterfalls and adventure trails. This city is 130km of my house and we're go by car, I don't drive so I could drink beer (In Brazil if you drink beer you don't drive). We do a trails walking by 10km, for me it's very hard because I don't practice exercise, but next month I will start in the gym (I hope). At the end of trails we're finish at a beautiful waterfall and your water was very cold. We were the all day this waterfall and in the end of afternoon we come back to our city. This photo we had not arrived at the waterfall but I think a beautiful place. See you later! Thanks!

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Hi Tyson...thanks for sharing! Here are some corrections for you:

 

My last weekend (last weekend)


Hi Everyone! Today I want to tell you all a little bit of about my weekend.

Well, I and more three friends and I we went to another city, your name is called Pirinópolis. and It's very famous in Brazil because have there are beautiful waterfalls and adventure trails. This city is 130km of from my house and we're go went by car. I don't didn't drive so I could drink beer (in Brazil if you drink beer you don't can't drive). We do a trails walking by 10km hiked a 10km trail and it was very hard for me it's very hard because I don't practice exercise much, but next month I will start in going to the gym (I hope). At the end of the trails we're we reached finish at a beautiful waterfall and your the water was very cold. We were the spent all day at this waterfall and in the end of late afternoon we come went back to our city.

In this photo we had not arrived at the waterfall yet but I still think it's a beautiful place.

See you later! Thanks!

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My last weekend

Hi Everyone! Today I'll tell you a little bit of my weekend.

Well, my three friends and I went to another city, the name is Pirinópolis and it's very famous in Brazil because there are beautiful waterfalls and adventure trails. This city is located 130km from my house. We went by car, but I didn't drive so I could drink beer (In Brazil if you drink beer you are not allowed to drive). We walked 10km trails, for me it was very hard because I don't practice physical exercises, but next month I will start working out in the gym (I hope). We finished the trail at a beautiful waterfall, the water was very cold.  We spent the rest of the time in this waterfall and in the end of afternoon we came back to our city.

This photo was not taken at the waterfall but I think it's a beautiful place.

See you later! Thanks!

 

[I hope this may help you! See you later!]

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walking 10km is so unbearable to be honest @.@

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