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Hangover Drinking with nice people is always good, but there's one problem: hangover. The more fun you have drinking, the more you suffer the next morning. It would be great if we could drink without worrying about hangovers. I've always been wondering what determines whether I end up having a headache the next morning or not, and how severe it will be. So I did a little study. Every time I had a hangover, I went over how much I drank and what I did the night before. Every time I DIDN'T have a hangover, I did the same process. Eventually, I've found a reliable way to reduce the risk of having a hangover. Drink a lot of water while drinking, and don't go to bed until you feel sober a little bit. I recommend taking a walk to breathe off some alcohol before getting home after drinking.

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Hangovers


Drinking with nice people is always good, but there's one problem: hangovers. The more fun you have drinking, the more you suffer the next morning. It would be great if we could drink without worrying about hangovers. I've always been wondereding what determines whether I end up having a headache the next morning or not, and how severe it will be. So I did a little study. Every time I had a hangover, I went over how much I drank and what I did the night before. Every time I DIDN'T have a hangover, I did the same process. Eventually, I've found a reliable way to reduce the risk of having a hangover. Drink a lot of water while drinking, and don't go to bed until you feel a little bit sober a little bit. I recommend taking a walk to breathe off work off some of the alcohol before getting home after drinking.

 

Excellent work! Your grasp of English is very good :)

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Hangover

Drinking with nice people is always good, but there's one problem: the hangover. The more fun you have drinking, the more you suffer the next morning. It would be great if we could drink without worrying about hangovers. I've always wondered what determines whether I end up having a headache the next morning or not, and how severe it will be. So I did a little study.

Every time I had a hangover, I went over how much I drank and what I did the night before. Every time I DIDN'T have a hangover, I did the same process. Eventually, I found a reliable way to reduce the risk of having a hangover. Drink a lot of water while drinking, and don't go to bed until you feel  a little bit sober. I recommend taking a walk to work off some alcohol before getting home after drinking.

 

Hello Kim,

Interesting subject and some interesting results. I have found two ways of avoiding a hangover. Either don't drink alcohol or don't stop drinking alcohol! :)  Either way it has the desired effect but your solution is probably better.

Just a few corrections for style and one grammar correction.

 

Wonder is a verb connected with the brain and as such is not usually used in the continuous form.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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Staying hydrated during the course of your drinking is important! I often try to drink something like a sports drink, because it has electrolytes which keep you hydrated even better than water alone. I don't know if they sell something like gatorade in Korea, but I would look into that if I were you.

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