Sightseeing in AKIBAHARA

I went to Akihabara today.
Firstly, I went to a bookstore, because I wanted to buy some books. After I bought them, I went to sightseeing there. There were many foreigners. I saw them where there were was the game center, maid café, Animate, Donkihote, and so on. <-- Not sure what this means

I was around Akibahara and bought one bag of Hello Kitty a Hello Kitty bag. After all, I came bake to stay at the guesthouse. I bought a ginger ale in a café. The ginger ale was dry, I suffered to from drinking it a little bit.
I didn’t talk to people because I’m shy… Westerner solidified by Westerners each other. Asian solidified by their friend each other. <--What do you mean here? 'solidified' is not the rignt word here.

I think there is no way because I’m shy. I gave up talking trying to talk to them. I’ll spend a lot of time in enjoying in Tokyo.

Have a nice day!^^

Have a nice day you too! ^.^

Sightseeing in AKIBAHARA

I went to Akihabara today.
Firstly, I went to a bookstore, because I wanted to buy some books. After I bought them, I went sightseeing and there were many foreigners. I saw them where there was a game center, maid café, Animate, Donkihote, and so on. I was around Akibahara and bought one bag of Hello Kitty. After all, I came back to stay at a guesthouse. I bought a ginger ale in a café. The ginger ale was dry, I suffered a little bit when I drank it.

I didn’t talk to people because I’m shy… Westerner solidified by Westerners each other. Asian solidified by their friend each other. I think there is no way because I’m shy. I gave up on talking to them. I’ll spend a lot of time enjoying Tokyo today. 

Have a nice day!^^

Sightseeing in Akihabara.

I went to Akihabara today. Firstly, I went to a bookstore, because I wanted to buy some books. After I bought them, Then I went to sightsee there. There were many foreigners. I saw them where there were  in game centers, maid cafés, Animates, Donkihotes, and so on. I was around Akibahara and bought a one bag of Hello Kitty bag. After that, I came back to my stay guesthouse. I bought a ginger ale in a café. The ginger ale was dry, so I suffered to drink it a little bit.
I didn’t talk to people because I’m shy… Westerner solidified by Westerners each other. Asian solidified by their friend each other <These two sentences do not make sense. I think there is no way because I’m shy. I gave up trying to talk to them. I’ll spend a lot of time while in enjoying myself in Tokyo.

Have a nice day!^^

Overall, Lily, not many issues with your writing here. By the way, what's a maid café.

--Ravi.