Why do they hide the truth?

Frequently, truths are hidden under the surface of the water, and people just see and believe the wrongs things that the within what society reveals and explains. There was a happening Recently in Korea, a sexual assault happened between two cadets in from the Korean Military Academy. The school authority announced that a male cadet committed a sexual violation against a female one in public and the male cadet therefore was sent to the military jail. Surprisingly, however, according to informal remarks, the truth is quite different from the report. According to informal results, they were known to be ex-girlfriend and ex-boyfriend and both of them agreed to do it have intercourse after a liquor party. Unfortunately, her present current boyfriend who noticed them to move secretly leaving the academy to another place, followed them and spread the distorted rumor against the male cadet in anger maybe which could have been a motive to destroy his career. Moreover, the netizens are adding their irrational opinions against the poor victim. I think it can happen enough among vigorous youths, and this can be considerded considered as a common thing event that can even happen in other many places of human society. However, why does our society always try to hide and distort the truth? As a result, it’s not that hard to witness some similarly distorted facts around us like this one around us.

Why do they hide the truth?

Frequently, truths are hidden under the surface of the water, and people just see and believe the wrong things that the society reveals and explains. There was such an event in Korea recently; a sexual assault between cadets in Korean Military Academy. The school authority announced that a male cadet had committed a sexual violation against a female one in public, and the male cadet was sent to the military jail.

Surprisingly, however, according to informal remarks, the truth is quite different from the report. They were ex-girlfriend and ex-boyfriend, and agreed to do it after a liquor party. Unfortunately, her present boyfriend, who noticed them to move secretly to another place, followed them, and spread the distorted rumor against the male cadet in anger, maybe to destroy his career.

Moreover, the netizens are adding their irrational opinions against the poor victim. I think it can happens enough among vigorous youths, and this can be considered a common thing that can happen even in other parts of human society. However, why does our society always try to hide and distort the truth? As a result, it’s not that hard to witness other similarly distorted facts, like this one, around us.

Hello SJH,

Just a few small errors, but they do not stop me from understanding the text. In the first paragraph you were reporting an event that happened before a point in time in the past. As you are referring to it from the point in the past, it becomes the past past and you should use the past perfect (had + past participle)

Hope this helps

Bob