Part of my Life

My family and I have been living in an apartment, and then we moved to a new building. It consists of four floors. It took a year for it to be ready to live in. The cost of building materials are so expensive, but we managed to make it done, Allah wiling. It is located in a special area. The whole building is not decorated, but the first floor is. I've had a big challenge and a great responsibility to keep the house from being sold. So I must find a suitable job as soon as possible.

Part of my Life

My family and me I had been living in an apartment, and then Wwe moved to a new building. It consists of four floors. It took a year for it to be being ready to live and living in. The cost of building materials are so expensive, but we managed to get make it done, Allah wiling. It is located in a special area. Not the whole building is not decorated, but the first floor is. I've have a big challenge and a great responsibility to keep the house from not being sold. So I must find a suitable job as soon as possible.

Good job! Other than a couple of errors I was able to understand with no problem. Remember: "I'' is used when it is part of the subject, never "me", the contraction of have to 've cannot be used when have is the main verb, but when it is the auxiliar verb for example: "I've been to Europe." Keep up the hard work!