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I learn English Hello. I wont tell about my day.Today is 17 Augustus. I stand-up at 10:00 o‘clock.My mum prepared my breakfast.My brother played computer gemes and my father was already at work. I washed and eaten.Then a studied play the guitar.I went to walk with my best friend.I love my friend very much. In the evening a went a home.My family and me had dinner. Then l watch tv and I went to bed.

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I learn English

Hello.
I will tell you about my day.Today is August 17th.
I woke up at 10:00 o'clock.My mum prepared my breakfast. My brother played computer gemes and my father was already at work.
I washed and ate.Then I practiced playing the guitar. I went to walk with my best friend.I love my friend very much.
In the evening I went a home. My family and I had dinner.
Then l watched tv and I went to bed.

You did very well! :) 

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Here is a correction --  I hope that it helps!  You have several small mistakes, but it is easy to understand your text -- and that is important!

 

I am learning English

 

Hello.

I want to tell you about my day.  Today is August 17th.  

I got up at 10:00. My mum prepared my breakfast.  My brother played computer games and my father was already at work.

I washed and ate. Then I studied and played the guitar. I went for a walk with my best friend. I love my friend very much.

In the evening, I went home. My family and I had dinner.

Then I watched TV and went to bed.

 

I learn English

Hello.
I wont tell about my day.Today is 17 Augustus.
I stand-up at 10:00 o‘clock.My mum prepared my breakfast.My brother played computer gemes and my father was already at work.
I washed and eaten.Then a studied play the guitar.I went to walk with my best friend.I love my friend very much.
In the evening a went a home.My family and me had dinner.
Then l watch tv and I went to bed.

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Good starting by using English to tell about your routine of spending the time but most of places there are gap in the continuation of sentence and selecting tense (past, present or future ) as per situation. Overall good try, Best of luck

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