我就要到（准备去）一个很有意思的地方去，庆祝我的生日！

我的生日就在一月一号。因为我的生日有这么多特别【1】，你大概会觉得我本来应该跟我家庆祝得很大家人隆重的庆祝【2】，可倒是我从来并没有任何过过一次很棒的生日。因为是这样子，我对我自己想说：“我今年应该到（去）一个很棒的目的地去庆祝我的生日”，所以，几天前，我买了一张去香港的飞机票Good！我跟我哥哥一块儿去：，然而，因为他住的城市距离我的比较远（三百五十公里左右），所以我们打算坐的飞机不一样不同的航班去（下飞机以后，我们打算在我们待住的宾馆见面）。我们会在香港这个地方待一个礼拜，我非常期待！我想要看看香港的新年烟火！过去在电视上我看到过，看起来牛屄逼了！

请你听听这个：https://www.dropbox.com/s/apc6fdwof0b5y4h/Vocaroo_s1mU8yNoK6Vq.mp3?dl=0（就是我朗读这篇短文）

I'm Going to a Very Interesting Place to Celebrate my Birthday!
My birthday is the first of January. You would think that because I have such a special birthday, I have always had great celebrations with my family, but, actually, I've never ever had a great birthday. Due to this, I thought to myself that this year I should go someone really awesome to celebrate my birthday, that's why I bought a plane ticket to go to Hong Kong a few days ago! I'm going to go with my brother. However, as he lives quite a long way away from me, we aren't going to take the same flight (we plan to meet up at the hostel in which we are staying). We are going to stay in Hong Kong for a week, I'm really excited! I want to watch the fireworks there! In the past I have seen them on television, and they look super awesome!

【1】"因为我的生日有这么多特别" natural say: 因为我的生日有这么多特别的意义，比如元旦节。or 因为我的生日很特别。

【2】“我本来应该跟我家庆祝得很大” natural say: 我应该跟我家人庆祝得很隆重 or 我应该跟我家人过很盛大的生日。   

庆祝（qing4 zhu4） 

Hi Laurence! Your writing is clearly, only a little error. I'm really surprising of your speaking. That's excellent! I wish you will have a great birthday in Hong Kong which would become your forever happy memories!

我要到一个很有意思的地方去庆祝我的生日！

我的生日就在一月一号。因为我的生日这么特别，你大概会觉得我每次都会跟我家人过很盛大的生日，可倒(dao4)是我从来并没有任何很棒的生日。因为是这样子，我对我自己说“我今年应该到一个很棒(bang4)的地方去庆祝我的生日”，所以，几天前，我买了一张去香港的飞机票！我跟我哥哥一块儿去(qu4)：然而，因为他住的城市离我的比较远（三百五十公里左右），所以我们会乘不同的航班去（下飞机以后，我们打算/计划在我们将要待(dai1)的宾馆见面）。我们会在香港待一个礼拜(bai4)，我非常期待！我想要看看香港的烟火(huo3)！过去我在电视上看到过，它们看起来老牛逼了！  

请你听听这个：https://www.dropbox.com/s/apc6fdwof0b5y4h/Vocaroo_s1mU8yNoK6Vq.mp3?dl=0（就是我朗读这篇短文）

BTW:

The words/characters Marked Red  are those I hear you pronouncing inaccurately.

The characters Marked Green ,'生' 、’去’ , is a little bit inaccurate.

The characters Marked Yellow is the correction.

我就要到一个很有意思的地方去，庆祝我的生日！

我的生日就在一月一号。因为我的生日有这么多很特别，你大概会觉得我本来应该跟我家人庆祝得很大隆重，可倒是我从来并没有过过任何很棒的生日。因为是这样子，我对我自己想“我今年应该到一个很棒的目的地地方去庆祝我的生日”，所以，几天前，我买了一张去香港的飞机票！我会跟我哥哥一块儿去：，然而，因为他住的城市离我的比较远（三百五十公里左右），所以我们打算坐的飞机不一样（下飞机以后，我们打算在我们待的宾馆见面）。我们会在香港这个地方待一个礼拜，我非常期待！我想要看看香港的烟火！过去在电视上我看到过，看起来牛屄了！

请你听听这个：https://www.dropbox.com/s/apc6fdwof0b5y4h/Vocaroo_s1mU8yNoK6Vq.mp3?dl=0（就是我朗读这篇短文）

I'm Going to a Very Interesting Place to Celebrate my Birthday!
My birthday is the first of January. You would think that because I have such a special birthday, I have always had great celebrations with my family, but, actually, I've never ever had a great birthday. Due to this, I thought to myself that this year I should go someone really awesome to celebrate my birthday, that's why I bought a plane ticket to go to Hong Kong a few days ago! I'm going to go with my brother. However, as he lives quite a long way away from me, we aren't going to take the same flight (we plan to meet up at the hostel in which we are staying). We are going to stay in Hong Kong for a week, I'm really excited! I want to watch the fireworks there! In the past I have seen them on television, and they look super awesome!

Your pronunciation is really clear and accurate. Although there have some grammer mistake, I can totally understand you.

你的发音很清晰很标准。虽然有一些语法错误，但我可以完全明白你的意思。

If you mean your family members, you should use “家人”。

When we say an event is big or great, we say it is a 盛大/隆重的 event/birthday.

过生日/庆祝生日

我从来并没有过过任何很棒的生日 the first 过is as the verb used to spend your time on birthday, as 过生日；the second 过 means that all the birthdays in this sentence are in the future. 

I've never ever（我从来没有过(here is the second 过)） had a great birthday（过很棒的生日）

因为是这样子 means that you are going to explain someting. means 因为

因为这样，means because of this/due to this.

The last sentence should never appear in a formal writing. 

一月一日香港的烟花很棒，我去年去了山顶看烟花。:-)

我就要到一个很有意思的地方，去，庆祝我的生日！

我的生日就在一月一号。因为我的生日有这么多特别，你大概会觉得我本来跟我家庆祝得很大（会和我的家人隆重的庆祝），可倒是我从来并没有过任何很棒的生日。因为一直都是这样子，所以我对我自己想“我今年应该到一个很棒的目的地方去庆祝我的生日”，所以，几天前，我买了一张去香港的飞机票！我跟我哥哥一块儿去：。然而，因为他住的城市离我的比较远（三百五十公里左右），所以我们打算坐的飞机航班不一样（下飞机以后，我们打算在我们待住的宾馆见面）。我们会在香港这个地方待一个礼拜，我非常期待！我想要看看香港的烟火！过去在电视上我在电视上看到过，看起来牛屄极了！

请你听听这个：https://www.dropbox.com/s/apc6fdwof0b5y4h/Vocaroo_s1mU8yNoK6Vq.mp3?dl=0（就这是我朗读这的一篇短文）

I'm Going to a Very Interesting Place to Celebrate my Birthday!
My birthday is the first of January. You would think that because I have such a special birthday, I have always had great celebrations with my family, but, actually, I've never ever had a great birthday. Due to this, I thought to myself that this year I should go someone really awesome to celebrate my birthday, that's why I bought a plane ticket to go to Hong Kong a few days ago! I'm going to go with my brother. However, as he lives quite a long way away from me, we aren't going to take the same flight (we plan to meet up at the hostel in which we are staying). We are going to stay in Hong Kong for a week, I'm really excited! I want to watch the fireworks there! In the past I have seen them on television, and they look super awesome!