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Essay practice: Two important facilities for my city It is obvious that the perfect city does not exist. Majors and the rest of local authorities have to constantly look for ways to answer citizens’ requests. Two of the facilities which are being demanded lately in every city with a fast growth of population are car parks and sport centres, and ours is not an exception. Car parks are an undeniable necessity. Lots of people have cars as the only way of moving around the city, going to work or picking up their children from school. Rich people can afford paying for a garage or even having one at home, but less fortunate people often have great difficulties in parking and usually spend even several hours a day looking for parking spots. That suppose a considerable declension of people’s life quality. But if car parks can improve people’s life, even more can a sport centre. It has been scientifically proved that playing sports make people healthier physically –by strengthening the heart, lungs and muscles- as well as psychologically –releasing the mind from stresses and worries-. Of course building a sport centre will not ensure that people will play sports, but not having it would certainly prevent it. In conlusion, car parks and a sport centre are both useful and worth of taking into consideration. However, priority should be given to the sport centre, since it directly involves citizens’ health, which from my point of view should be the main concern in every city plan.

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Essay practice: Two important facilities for my city

 

The perfect city does not exist. Majors and the rest of local authorities have to constantly look for new ways to solve citizens’ requests. Car parking and Sport Centers are two of the most facilities demanded in a growing city and ours is not an exception.

 

Car parking is an undeniable necessity. Lots of people use cars to move around the city. They use cars for going to work or picking up their children from school.

 

Rich people can afford to pay for their own garage at home, but most people have some difficulty to park their cars and even they usually spend too many hours trying to find a free parking place. It suppose a considerable declension on people’s life quality. 

 

But if car parks can improve people’s life, sport centers can too. It has been scientifically proved that playing sports make people healthier physically –by strengthening the heart, lungs and muscles- as well as psychologically –releasing the mind from stresses and worries-. Of course, building a sport centre will not ensure that people will play sports, but not having it would certainly prevent it. 

 

In conlusion, car parks and a sport centre are both useful and worth for taking into a consideration. However, sport centre must be a priority because it involves people health which in my opinion, it should be the main concern in every city plan.

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