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The fruit juice August the 13th. There was a lot of humidity today. I have a sweet tooth! I want to eat cakes and chocolates every day. ;) However I usually don't eat fruit. Today I bought a fruit juice for the first time in a while. There ware peaches, oranges and muscat grapes in the juice. It was very good! From now on, I'm going to have a fruit by the juice.

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The fruit juice

August the 13th.


There was a lot of humidity today.

 

I have a sweet tooth so I want to eat cakes and chocolates every day. ;) However I usually don't eat fruit. Today I bought a fruit juice for the first time in a while. There were peaches, oranges and muscat grapes in the juice. It was very good!
From now on, I'm going to have a fruit juice every day. 


So

I have a sweet tooth (reason) so I want to eat cakes and chocolates every day (result)

 

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The fruit juice

August the 13th.
There was a lot of humidity today.

I have a sweet tooth!

 

I want to eat cakes and chocolates every day. ;)

 

The blue sentence is okay, but it might be better to write

 

I wish I could eat cakes and chocolates every day. ;)


However I usually don't eat fruit.
Today I bought a fruit juice for the first time in a while. There ware peaches, oranges and muscat grapes in the juice. It was very good!
From now on, I'm going to have a fruit by the juice get fruit from juice

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