help me whit the Personal Statement
Hi, I want write a personal statement, but Im not sure please help me.
Good Day,
My name is Mayra Jazmin Argume Quino from Perú, I'm 21 years old. I'm a proactive person, my hobbies are play tennis, play the piano, read and adventure deports. I studied informatic systems in my country but I discovered that I want study is medicine.
well I dont know how i have finish...can you help me? say me ideas, or any things, I want study in europe or in usa.
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Dear Sir/Madam, (use this for formal greetings)
My name is Mayra Jazmin Argume Quino and I'm from Peru. I'm 21 years old and I'm a proactive person and my hobbies include playing tennins, playing the piano, reading and adventure sports. I studied informatic systems previsously but I have now realised that I want to study medicine.
Some ideas:
Why do you want to study medicine?
Why should they select you to study medicine?
Why are you a proactive person? Thats good if you want to be a doctor I should think, explain that to them
Hope this helps
Matt
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Help me with my Personal Statement
Hi, I want to write a personal statement, but I'm not sure. please help me.
Good Day,
My name is Mayra Jazmin Argume Quino from Perú. I'm 21 years old. I'm a proactive person. My hobbies are playing tennis, piano, reading and adventuring deports(Abroad). I studied informatic systems in my country but I have realized that what I wanted to study is medicine.
Well, I dont know how to finish this...Can you help me? Share me some ideas, or anything... I want to study in Europe or USA.
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